| = Please comment on this and the one before... sometimes one cannot be impersonal | Sydney Krivenko [27.Feb.07 20:05] |
| Luminita, I tried, but as it is an erotic poem, I do not like this impersonal version... still, I am taking your advice in other works.Please let me know your opinion on the last two poems! Thanks, Sydney | |
| = put your lights on | felix nicolau [27.Feb.07 22:45] |
| this liquid sweeping using light has something of indian summer in it. | |