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 =  rough around the corners
ion amariutei
[12.Apr.07 17:53]
a simpler topic would seem more natural:

back to ourselves
when we get lost in time;
in a sandglass weeping is eternal.

back to ourselves
each season;
in love, with a constant soul.

We always go back:
You and I.

the end could be a lot better if you somehow maintain the theme

 =  rules...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[29.Aug.07 09:40]
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