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= please revise first...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[10.May.07 18:45]
...tears to split
The pain in thousand and one thought
That could...

Please revise the above part as it seems to contain some grammar inadvertences.
I’ll check back after, and see what you did.
Otherwise the poem is worth reading.

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= please revise first...	Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [10.May.07 18:45]
...tears to split The pain in thousand and one thought That could... Please revise the above part as it seems to contain some grammar inadvertences. I’ll check back after, and see what you did. Otherwise the poem is worth reading. Success.