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 =  please revise...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[22.May.07 06:54]
"he cough" must be "he coughs" in the context. Please revise.

 =  i'll change it into he'd cough
Carp Bogdan
[22.May.07 21:38]
Tenq, indeed.

 =  some more...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[22.May.07 21:37]
book shelfs - bookshelves
happyness - happiness
cryes - cries

Please do a spell check before you post your poetry.

Success.

 =  i've changed the text
Carp Bogdan
[24.May.07 15:48]
tq again




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