| = welcome | Anca Veronica Anghel [07.Nov.03 17:53] |
| Welcome ! | |
| = dust in the wind | Andreea Drăguleasa [09.Nov.03 15:34] |
| Your poem reminded me of the music I love: U2 - Staring at the Sun Lake of Tears - Crimson Cosmos Sting - Desert Rose ... Therefore, it has been a pleasure for me to wander through your "dust". Still, I think the last part of the poem can still be perfected; there is a slight rupture of the rhythm. Not to mention that mispelled "crumbled" :) I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Andreea | |
| = Lake Of Tears | Florian Ardelean [13.Nov.03 01:16] |
| Thank you for your opinion, Andreea. Actually I use the first part of the poem as lyrics for one of my songs.. who knows, you might hear it someday on the radio or something :) By the way, the songs you mentioned... I like them. I really like Lake of Tears... Now I wonder how I can make corrections to the text?! | |