| = like it a lot | Andreea Drãguleasa [10.Nov.03 18:25] |
| I think this is the first English poem I've ever read online that has a postmodernist influence. And I like that a lot, especially the "people are showing up people are showing up people" part and those lovely pebbles... It's a dizzy word-game worth following "round and round". Congrats! Andreea | |
| = again spelling | Anca Veronica Anghel [10.Nov.03 19:00] |
| Nice poem but please use the spell checker and you will see how many spelling errors you have. It is so easy to use. I don't understand why you don't use it. It is in Word. It is simple, easy, convenient and it looks much better when you post something that has no typos/spelling errors in it. What you think. Usually if a posting has spelling errors it has to be rejected for correction. Thank you. | |
| = a little help | Andreea Drãguleasa [10.Nov.03 19:08] |
| "reccurency" - recurrency "lighting" - lightning "appearence" - appearance | |
| = spelling area:) | wendy angela [10.Nov.03 19:19] |
| ..and innocent typos they were, 'lighting' and 'appearence'. as for the 'recurrency' spelling, i must admit i had absolutely no clue:) i wrote this poem directly inside the charming and ever-appealing edit window... ...in order to preserve my tinkerbell influences and generally spontaneous nature:) | |