= be my fake soul | Andreea DrĂ£guleasa [17.Nov.03 21:55] |
the easter of my dreams in a parody of hell's garden I pretend to steal what I really own I liked your poem a lot; I'll dream of lilies and black eyes... A. | |
= an (english) opinion:) | Diana Pascu Chifane [18.Nov.03 10:32] |
It's better to say 'some notes at the end'. | |
= back in black | Andreea DrĂ£guleasa [18.Nov.03 16:40] |
Now that you mentioned that, Diana, I have a suggestion, too: "Some ending notes" :) It's a pleasure to come back to this poem, for all the yet unknown flowers of one's soul. Andreea | |
= Very nice | Iuliana Ungureanu [18.Nov.03 21:13] |
I like the title better as it is. Jesus is told to be gay by whom? Your flowers, the ones that live in a "parody of hell's garden" remind me of Baudelaire's "fleurs du mal". Very good rythm, the first reading left me breathless. | |
= thank you | Michel Martin [22.Nov.03 16:47] |
Thanks for your comments. The title will stay as it is, each of you can understand it in a different way. | |