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Andrei Horia Gheorghiu
[03.Dec.03 18:40]
You might want to change "Making you falling" into "Making you fall".
I'm not sure either about "You’d neither be able to." I'm not saying it's not correct, I'm just saying it doesn't sound English. I would have said "Nor would you be able to."
I also suppose that you meant "full of satisfaction" instead of "fool of satisfaction".

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= Check	Andrei Horia Gheorghiu [03.Dec.03 18:40]
You might want to change "Making you falling" into "Making you fall". I'm not sure either about "You’d neither be able to." I'm not saying it's not correct, I'm just saying it doesn't sound English. I would have said "Nor would you be able to." I also suppose that you meant "full of satisfaction" instead of "fool of satisfaction".