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= corections
Iuliana Ungureanu
[04.Dec.03 23:41]
"let go you" should be "let you go", "remember of those days" should be "remember those days" and you used the metaphor "made me shine" twice, a thing which really should not be done by a poet with experience.
= Ms.Ungureanu, Thanks!
Adela-Adriana Moscu
[05.Dec.03 06:34]
I appreciate your words, and I shall conform. Thank you !

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= corections	Iuliana Ungureanu [04.Dec.03 23:41]
"let go you" should be "let you go", "remember of those days" should be "remember those days" and you used the metaphor "made me shine" twice, a thing which really should not be done by a poet with experience.

= Ms.Ungureanu, Thanks!	Adela-Adriana Moscu [05.Dec.03 06:34]
I appreciate your words, and I shall conform. Thank you !