| = couple of suggestions | ion amariutei [19.Dec.03 22:32] |
| pretty much like before: *Most people cry* *The most beautiful and meaningless thing is nostalgia.* - not necessary to repeat *most*. i still don't have the big dictionary, but i think *nostalgia* is the correct form. nostalgia is by definition a *human* emotion, not necessary to specify | |
| = Suggestions | kurt cnejevici [19.Dec.03 23:12] |
| Human nostalgia can indeed touch you in many ways. You may want however to make the following changes: It is suffers not “sufferes”, nostalgia not “nostalgy”, and probably giving birth to tears rather than tear-birth. | |
| = ok | Miriam Cihodariu [22.Dec.03 00:11] |
| thanks for the suggestions and for stopping by. | |
| = Forget... | FLAVIUS B. VLAD [20.Mar.06 09:42] |
| Forget the naysayers; I for one wholly enjoyed your poem. All the best, Flavius B. Vlad | |
| = well, | Miriam Cihodariu [06.Apr.06 14:15] |
| thank you again for taking the time to see beneath the words. See ya' around. | |