| + congrat | Anca Anghel Novac [20.Feb.04 22:49] |
| I'm wondering why this is not a poem? I see you entered it under "personals". May I ask you why? Again, with this poem you show your ability to create, to imagine and to give a lot to your reader by using English Language I liked so much what you wrote. Congrat ! | |
| = obs. | dana popa [12.Mar.04 14:52] |
| Quite frightening images in your poem. I enjoyed reading it as well, though I think you should turn "'who knows where lies the truth?'" into who knows where the truth lies? Doesn't that sound better? | |
| = Res | florin enache [17.Mar.04 04:32] |
| I'll start by quoting a friend of mine:I'n not a poet Dominique.Never was; never will be.I just have some thoughts that haunt my mind and the only way to stop them is to put them on paper and thus make them silent(at least for a while). Dominique I never did thank you for your support so here goes:thank you for the feedback and support - it means a lot to me. Peta- frightening images? as I see it this is one of my "well-behaved poems".About that line it sounds better in proper English but if I write it like that I lose something in the music behind the words and I can't handle that right now. | |
| = Re's | florin enache [17.Mar.04 00:32] |
| I'll start by quoting a friend of mine: I'm not a poet Dominique...Never was, never will be. I just have some thoughts that haunt my mind and the only way to stop them is to put them on paper and thus render them silent (at least for awhile). To Peta now...What frightening images? As I see it this is one of my "well-behaved poems". If I change that line it will lose it's purpose so I think it will remain the way it is. Thank you both for taking the time to read this... | |