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= beyond the inner desert
kurt cnejevici
[06.Jun.04 23:49]
Reads like a wonderful love story transcending time and space, in an alternate reality populated only by the two lovers and figments of their imagination. Everything is suspended in time and nothing else matters except their love, protected far away, in a castle, deep in the desert, or beyond....

Needs some corrections (running, dwarfs, hide and seek, we didn’t give, losing etc.) and maybe some re-phrasing but other than that is a good poem.

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= beyond the inner desert	kurt cnejevici [06.Jun.04 23:49]
Reads like a wonderful love story transcending time and space, in an alternate reality populated only by the two lovers and figments of their imagination. Everything is suspended in time and nothing else matters except their love, protected far away, in a castle, deep in the desert, or beyond.... Needs some corrections (running, dwarfs, hide and seek, we didn’t give, losing etc.) and maybe some re-phrasing but other than that is a good poem.