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 =  "Become what you are"
Cristian Rusneac
[11.Feb.05 11:37]
I read these words somewhere and yet I fail to remember who they belong to, I always do! Yours, however, is a beautiful poem of becoming.
"Until I entered laughing in the valley of sorrow
Where a body is just like a river of protest." - I stand amazed and in awe to that!
"I give in to you, incessant dream – nothing but blue –
Since some of our bodies made of dust have a heavenly hue."
That heavenly hue surely is a powerful driving force!




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