|+ time to fall|
|This poem is nearly shakespearean. A certain sadness surrounding a feeling which almost touches craziness. The fullfilled space of an empty, deserted soul. |
The last stanza is just beautiful. I can't even read it again, it's like a spell made by bewitched sounds, not words.
The most emotional poem I red this autumn. Or shall we call it fall? I love "fall". And you used it there perfectly.
Completly British, no doubt.
| = odd|
Indeed surprise, I wouldn't expect you to have the same perception of the English falls as mine, isn't that amazingly odd?
I could say that I am honoured but that'd be man'ish, I am actually pleased.
Too nice words for such a Cinderella of all falls.
| = Nice|
Anca Maria Morcovescu
|I like the musicality and the imagery in your poem. Nice!|
| = Anca|
|Thanks, Anca, I think musicality is important when it comes to poems.|