| = Remember!!! :)))) | Diana Pacuraru [30.Jan.05 00:52] |
| You have some wrong spelling, like "luckest" instead of "luckiest" and "emptyness" instead of "emptiness", but overall, your poem is simple and sincere. The idea devil - angel, the feeling of love, everything makes the poem "softcore", but nice. Keep writing if you feel like it, but remember when you write it :))))))))))) | |
| = I was wondering... | Dennis Edward Moustapha [12.Feb.05 07:59] |
| What is a "beetwen" anyways? And how are you supposed to be lucky sittin' "amongst" men all day long? Go get yourself a "girl", Evil-Boy! P.S. A twice fallen angel amounts to a devil in love... I'm sooo good at math! | |