| = To be revised | Andrei Horia Gheorghiu [21.Oct.04 09:31] |
| I'm afraid I'm gonna ask you to change "stiffy" with anything else you like. Just check it in your dictionary. Thank you. | |
| = don't get the problem, but whatever | Sorin Grad [22.Oct.04 17:30] |
| http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=stiff I have removed the final "y", I hope it's all right now, although I was talking about a corpse, how else could one describe it? | |
| = Morbituary of self conscience | Diana Pacuraru [08.Nov.04 20:52] |
| Are you sure you want to see yourself as a morbid existence, full of hopelessness? It seems that you are not so sure of yourself, as of what I read in this poem. | |
| = life is a joke | Sorin Grad [11.Nov.04 19:08] |
| there are things I like and things I don't; sometimes I think of myself somehow, sometimes otherhow; this poem has been written at three different moments of time, I was different each time | |