| = Camica|
|Hi! Your poem is very appealing, I must confess. |
There one detail that confuses me a bit… I could not understand who is this “she” in the verses below:
I will touch her every room
And she will breathe love more easier.
I will take a leap of faith and assume “she” is “it” i.e. “the heart”. Actually, I will tell you a secret: I believe that, by replacing “she” and “her” with “it” and “its” in those verses, the Romanian woman will eliminate a serious rival. Do you know what I mean?
| = How is this idea?|
Ioana Camelia Popa
|You guessed right, in those verses it is about the heart, but what if "the heart " it is not a rival, but a weapon or a tool, a personified one...|