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= Thrilling, strong
Edilberto González Trejos
[03.May.05 10:17]
The language used here is strong and the images, urban.
You keep the reader thrilled and the end is ambiguous, maybe to keep the thrill on us.
I see the talent of a narrator in this poem of yours.
Write on!

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= Thrilling, strong	Edilberto González Trejos [03.May.05 10:17]
The language used here is strong and the images, urban. You keep the reader thrilled and the end is ambiguous, maybe to keep the thrill on us. I see the talent of a narrator in this poem of yours. Write on!