| = Lory | Lory Cristea [11.May.05 22:32] |
| ...i wish to hold a huge second in that simple breath , to seek out in it the meaning of waiting the end , or the new start . | |
| = breathless image | Lidia Georgescu [31.Jan.06 14:47] |
| very nice imagery. conveys a certain emotion. good poem, sort of elliptical, lets read between the lines. | |