| = nicoleta | Corina Gina Papouis [07.Sep.09 20:34] |
| maybe to simplistic, can't see much depth here. could you expand the idea? I sense malice here!:) and also shouldn't truth be true? cheers, Corina | |
| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [07.Sep.09 20:51] |
| try and explore the concept of dream: synonyms, composition, what do they taste like:)...I, the reader, want to see inside it with my own eyes. the repetition of 'dream' 3 times is not very pleasant + does not achieve the desired effect. cheers, Corina | |