+ Rich images in this one- | John Willy Kopperud [20.Sep.09 15:02] |
-especially towards the end. I did enjoy it. Cheers from Willy | |
= a little | Corina Gina Papouis [20.Sep.09 15:06] |
nag from me: easily instead of easy!:)otherwise great imagery. cheers, Corina | |
= inversion | Diana Todea [20.Sep.09 20:49] |
I rather suggest: the children (easily) lose it (easily) from their eyes. One of the 2 versions. At the end is not good. Nice poem. Cheers! | |
= comm | Alice Diana Boboc [21.Sep.09 13:04] |
Willy: Thank you very much for your star! Corina & Diana : Thank you for yours suggestion! Cheers! Alice | |