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 =  Nice.
Dely Cristian Marian
[24.Sep.09 10:57]
Your own star wars.

And still:

(there are new planets
with dinosaurs and lava
out there
and no warning signs!)


 =  great
Marius Surleac
[24.Sep.09 11:17]
Wonderful rush down here. For me your poem looks like a mother-and-son perspective, a happy moment when children imagine lots of things and so on, and they insist sharing their joy with parents.


 =  about rushing...
Corina Gina Papouis
[24.Sep.09 17:03]
the bit you picked there Cristian is that feeling of wonder, astonishment, bewilderment while falling for someone, with someone.

Marius, I think we may be able to transfer those projected images to child-parent relationship, however, my intention here was to...'fall in love'.

thank you both for your kind comments,:),

 =  As Adrian Henry put it:
John Willy Kopperud
[25.Sep.09 11:42]
- We will both be up early tomorrow
a new universe has begun.

And thus you are the pilot flying into the merry, chaotic realm of love, Corina. Brilliant!
Cheers from Willy

 =  to infinity and beyond:)
Corina Gina Papouis
[25.Sep.09 12:03]
Willy you know how to make a poetry-chick blush!:)))

Thank you for your kind sign of appreciation and that connection with Adrian Henry (I love his writings!)...I think that Love is a blast off followed by...God's speed...and the whole univers is there for us to tackle.

Who are we to say no?:)


 =  lepadah
Lydia Percy
[28.Sep.09 18:13]
I enjoyed this piece reminded me of Billy Collins nice. Also thanks for the comment and the read.

Peace Lydia

 =  thank you Lydia
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Sep.09 00:15]
I am flattered by your comment and that reminder you mentioned, Billy be it!
let's carry on reading!

 =  Just like a tornado
Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea
[23.Nov.09 13:12]
Indeed is the feeling of falling in love, because the couple flies upside down among the stars of the universe and the unknown planets, that are waiting to be discovered. Love is sometimes odd, yet pleasant like a sweet vertigo.

I have enjoyed very much this emotional trip, that had the speed of light.



 =  energy
felix nicolau
[27.Nov.09 19:37]
the reading goes extremely well on a musical background like jeff wayne's war of the worlds

 =  :)
Corina Gina Papouis
[27.Nov.09 21:23]
'the chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one/ but still they come...(or so he he said)

Great film!

next time I'll lay my eyes on my Rush I shall turn the speakers up :)

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