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 =  A dangerous game,
Dely Cristian Marian
[04.Oct.09 10:34]
Russian roulette, deadly. Even a blank bullet burns
if shot from close range; and you don't know who's gonna play it.
What if it hurts you?

Rather instigating, I'd say. Looks different this way, as it's a hunting plan instead of an unexpected trigger.

Now, let's have some fun.

"can you hear the greyhounds
sniffing your footsteps?"

I've seen a running rabbit, here, and the child in me said: "Definetly, it will turn out to be: Bugs Bunny!"

Cheers


 =  err
Dely Cristian Marian
[04.Oct.09 18:52]
*definitely, not definetly

In addition:
Enya - May it be

PS. - I wonder if my comment made any sense...

 =  one bullet
Corina Gina Papouis
[04.Oct.09 19:50]
yes, it did, although Russian roulette should never (I repeat never!) be played under 18:))). I guess I went for a different angle, a contorted vision of a torn mind playing Russian roulette (decision-making) with own thoughts: some have the hounds, some have the gunpowder, experience vs unknown, one bullet, one finger, one truth! to tell or not to tell: this is the question.
now press the trigger, in your own time...if you dare...
Cheers!
Corina

PS thanks for Enya and May it be!:)

+ Hatred, war and guntoting-
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Oct.09 10:06]
-means Russian roulette every time, Corina, since you never know who's the game and who's the hunter. "He who lives by the sword will die by the sword." The poem contains a clear reference to wilderness/getting lost, which makes me consider the perils of love and hate, generally speaking emotions, those we can't do without, but may find very hard to handle. I guess
my personal interpretation will vary with every reading, a fact that I appreciate. And, let me add, it was good reading!
Cheers from Willy

 =  instability
Corina Gina Papouis
[07.Oct.09 23:00]
..or that state of mind is the rule of this game..different every time...what a thrill..:)
thank you Willy for feedback and appreciation!
Corina

 =  awesome.
Dan Moldoveanu
[27.Oct.09 12:26]
Excellent pressure buildup. This one truly feels like a loaded gun all along!

 =  :)
Corina Gina Papouis
[27.Oct.09 18:16]
...as I said before: don't try this at home! thanks for your generous comment!
Corina




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