| = Chris, | Marius Surleac [27.Oct.09 09:56] |
| welcome back my friend. It's been a long time since you haven't shown around. I see in this new poem a soft switch of style, a more mature perspective than other poems of yours, its like a self-finding angle pointed towards stability. Also, the imagery is great and the effect is well perceived. Well done! P.S. Have seen two minor errors: "listening" instead of "listning" and "boundaries" instead of "boundries". Cheers, Marius | |