| = + | Marius Surleac [12.Nov.09 11:16] |
| Well done Corina. Your rhyming poetry sounds great. Though I must say that in the last stanza the rhythm is not the same as for the previous 3, but recovers from the loss with the last two lines. Regards, Marius | |
| = broken | Corina Gina Papouis [13.Nov.09 00:20] |
| loneliness in Gothic colours.. broken rhyme/ heart - yes but the rhythm is ok, recovered well :).. thank you M for your comment! Corina | |