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 =  The children of the wind-
John Willy Kopperud
[30.Dec.09 13:42]
-running. I enjoyed the mystifying images here, though I'm not absolutely sure that this "almost fixed meter" solution works ultimately. And; anyhow these poems may come to you, some of them deserve a title. This is one and I like it!
Cheers from Willy

 =  All is not what it seems :)
Alina Popescu
[30.Dec.09 14:21]
I'm glad you like them :) I'm also sure they deserve a title, it's just that I can't find a good/suitable one. Through the years I've noticed that I'm simply impossible when it comes to tiles. I can't even remember the titles of songs/books I read, so...
As for the fixed metre... well, it's not something done on purpose. That's the shape I get these "things" in. And besides, not all are in a fixed form.

Thank you for reading and for your interest.

 =  thought...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[30.Dec.09 20:27]

What about "children of the wind" instead of "the children of the wind"? It makes much more sense, and gives a more powerful end note...

Just a thought...


 =  I felt it
raj thampi
[30.Dec.09 21:09]
I felt it, wonderful write. thanks

 =  Why it is so
Alina Popescu
[07.Feb.10 17:43]
Romulus, there's someone out there who may be able answer your question, if he could be bothered to intervene. Would he provide the explanation ? I wonder...

 =  *
Ravendark Scar Furiel
[29.Sep.10 08:12]
are we supposed to wage thy wars?
like crows we hearken to the fray
so let the wind lick these old scars
as words lead blood once more astray

to those who know not who we are
who read the lines, but did not see
the children of the wind we are
like him we are wayward and free

we are not flesh although we look like you
we take on any shape we choose
we came to be into this world, and mind you
that is to say we were not born of womb

we roam the plains and run with bizons
howl through the woods as packs of wolves
we're 'round the corner, in the darkness
we're everything you fear and hunger sets us loose

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