| = . | Marius Surleac [12.Feb.10 22:26] |
| please modify: - one's - salvation I think you should pay more attention when writing. Like now, the text isn't well structured and looks like written in a hurry. Also, how the amount of "month" word sounds to you? ... it's too repetitive and this doesn't help it. | |
| = Mr Marius | Claudiu-Mihai GURGUȚÃ [10.Dec.18 14:27] |
| Thank you Mr. Marius for the lecture and for the suggestions! I will look into them and see to they get the proper treatment they must. Thank you for the constructive feedback. | |