Members comments:

= .
Veronica Valeanu
[25.Mar.10 19:27]
there are errors to take care of
plus, you followed only a single logical chain of ideas around the same topic - this makes the poem a weak one. take care of building an atmosphere!
and it would help
= !
Corina Gina Papouis
[09.Nov.10 19:57]
The errors Veronica mentioned above are still there!
Please review.

No anonymous comments allowed !
In order to post comments and texts
you must have an account and then LOGIN !

Go back !

Warning: Unknown: write failed: No space left on device (28) in Unknown on line 0

Warning: Unknown: Failed to write session data (files). Please verify that the current setting of session.save_path is correct (/var/www/dynamic/-agonia.v3-2/www/tmp) in Unknown on line 0

= .	Veronica Valeanu [25.Mar.10 19:27]
there are errors to take care of plus, you followed only a single logical chain of ideas around the same topic - this makes the poem a weak one. take care of building an atmosphere! and it would help

= !	Corina Gina Papouis [09.Nov.10 19:57]
The errors Veronica mentioned above are still there! Please review.