= Allow me to suggest- | John Willy Kopperud [03.Apr.10 02:24] |
-that you reshape this quite a bit. You seem to use too many words and your English is a bit off the mark. On the other hand you seem to have some ideas and therefore potential. Now then, my suggestion here; you may use some of it and revise a bit yourself, but anyway: My eyes have seen no influence no change, or difference between the worlds. The eyes of fire. The breathe of the earth. Now I retrace my steps to the forest. I'll go to sleep again. | |