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Veronica Valeanu
[12.Apr.10 18:50]
something wakes me up/
still needing improvements to be changed from romantic thoughts into a poem
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Veronica Valeanu
[12.Apr.10 20:20]
i suggest a little rearrangement

while sleeping,
something stirs me up
every so often,
the sudden overwhelming light
the blessing on my lips.

it's you
in a way
that almost makes the air
cry.

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= .	Veronica Valeanu [12.Apr.10 18:50]
something wakes me up/ still needing improvements to be changed from romantic thoughts into a poem

= .	Veronica Valeanu [12.Apr.10 20:20]
i suggest a little rearrangement while sleeping, something stirs me up every so often, the sudden overwhelming light the blessing on my lips. it's you in a way that almost makes the air cry.