| = to conclude | alina livia lazãr [15.Jun.10 00:45] |
| Hi, Diana. I like this concept of "wow effect", it sounds like the logo for a Rimmel product - which is good as the whole poem evolves around an idea of life's dynamics and sparkling colours. It is interesting how you dramatically switched the line in the second half of the poem where the images are somehow mirrored/opposed. In a few words, I like the precision of your text which leads to a clear/doubled message. At least, for me. :) | |
| = thanks | Diana Todea [15.Jun.10 16:37] |
| Cheers, Alina, for your comment. Indeed you identified correctly some of my points I tried to make here. Cheers, Diana | |