| = like this | Corina Gina Papouis [18.May.11 23:31] |
| the cool tone goes well with the open ending. it is not the line under_____ but the door through.. the next chapter awaits. so cheers :) | |
| = coolness | Diana Todea [20.May.11 09:22] |
| Indeed, Corina, today we feel we need to lose the dramatic tone and instead act cool about everything. So why not do this in poetry too? Thank you for your comment and feel free to stop anytime. Cheers, Diana. | |