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+ Anticipating the light...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[01.Nov.12 10:05]
Hi Ronald,

Your poem reminded me of when my wife was pulling together the stripes of challah dough, rearranging simplicity into something else, nobler, tender, yet to bear the heat to come...
And even though I wished you wouldn't tie the end, I realise you needed that in order to allow the raised middle to glow.
Beauty waiting just for the candle lighting's right time.

With respect,

rcm




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