= . | Veronica Vãleanu [07.Aug.12 10:25] |
[when playing, we won't be able to hear the soldiers' steps] instead of [playing, we'll can't hear the soldiers step] -because the modal vb "can't" doesn't allow the typical auxiliary "will" for the future; you have to use its alternative "won't be able to" [cuddle/snuggle] instead of [are grasping behind our shoulders] and do smth about that part: "it s still summer in the sky / winter is in the air}, it's the weakest part of the text | |
= look... | Anni- Lorei Mainka [07.Aug.12 12:26] |
My final verses are for me so short and explain exactly what I want. The change at the beginning - : I did it... Thank you for your help. It helps really after so many years to train words and emotions. | |