| = sublime... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [11.Dec.12 12:33] |
| Hi res, I must confess to have felt like being nailed to any wall of any remaining indifference about this life's true meaning, if anyone would dare claiming to know anything about such... I've read your poem early this morning, shocked and breathless in the end, with one thing in my mind, and please take this as it is from someone with his heart on his sleeves, that is be given the honour of recommending you. I will be back with more, as your poem truly deserves sitting around the fire of true poetry and talk about it, a lot more. Congratulations again. rcm | |
| = mini treatise on a continuous exodus... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [11.Dec.12 22:14] |
| As I said, I'll be back, to ponder a bit on what gives me a sense of lostness at some intersection of heaven and hell, shattered by the impossibility of even such a thought, just to realise I'm exactly there, on this sphere of dirt, lonely Prometheus waiting for the long dead hawk... I could write my PhD on the extraordinary amalgam of theology and humanistic thought, mixed but never mingled, bound together by he regret of finding peace in neither... I truly loved the illusion of hope, just to find the safety net of reality, with only one point of firmness, the existence of a "you" to never allow the utter misery of an absolutely lonely "me"... Because whatever that "we" consists of, makes this continuous exodus from Eden more bearable than the solitude of the one still wandering alone ever since, in his flame guarded garden. Because the "where are you" should have been asked by those left on themselves by the one who knew too well who the "serpent" truly was... The end is absolutely superb, hoping someone else would want to write another mini PhD, and give you a golden star, as I can't give you both:-) Honoured to be present wit you on the same site, rcm | |
| = Gracias mi amigo | Ronald E Shields [12.Dec.12 16:39] |
| rcm, I am humbled by your kind words. Thank you for reading and recommending my poetry. I am most grateful for the time and thought you invest. | |