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Corina Gina Papouis
|this approach has an interesting way of captivating the reader: it is written in many styles - a journal page that usually you do not come across unless you dig into somebody's drawers with a purpose.|
I would suggest in the paragraph where you talk about the pain threshold:
'The pain is less powerful now' - I would suggest the word 'intense'
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|Thanks for stopping by Corina. I agree with your suggestion, 'intense' instead of 'powerful'. And I admit that you are right, I gathered this material from different places in my computer. It is like a scrapbook or a collage.|