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Corina Gina Papouis
[13.Feb.13 12:59]
this approach has an interesting way of captivating the reader: it is written in many styles - a journal page that usually you do not come across unless you dig into somebody's drawers with a purpose.

I would suggest in the paragraph where you talk about the pain threshold:

'The pain is less powerful now' - I would suggest the word 'intense'

 =  collage
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
[13.Feb.13 13:12]
Thanks for stopping by Corina. I agree with your suggestion, 'intense' instead of 'powerful'. And I admit that you are right, I gathered this material from different places in my computer. It is like a scrapbook or a collage.

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