| = is there more?|
|Now, that to me sounds interesting, catching, yet enigmatic. Is it the beginning of something unhappened?|
|+ very good|
Corina Gina Papouis
|captivating, mysterious, dark yet fluid and powerful.|
love the ambiguity created and I would love to read more like this!
this part has its own league: "death is not as serious as life. You just swallow a knot in your throat from the corner of the star still left for you."
| = thanks|
|Thanks Lavinia, thanks Corina! My apologies for this belated answer. This prose poem is a whole by itself.|
| = I certainly enjoyed-|
John Willy Kopperud
|the imagery of this one. Thanks for sharing!|
Cheers from Willy