| = Amazing... The End? | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [25.Sep.05 11:05] |
| I can describe your text in few words, * so marvelous * Questioning both facts on how human perceive the end as just a mortal belief, perhaps a human approach towards things, and the existence of God, on how the Great one bounded things for us, especially the unwanted things, those desparing ends. I reaally liked how you make opinion on how we perceive the ending, neither by means of neccesity nor opinion. I like your style on how you express your thoughts out of poetry!! But then, poetry have rules to be followed so you should be correcting some of this! capitalize the i on the last part, and put an apostrophe on ill...That will make your text more extravagant for me! Rock on Dude! | |