| = "...weightless spectral on a drak terrarium" | Edilberto González Trejos [26.Sep.05 00:07] |
| Joshua, there is a lot to say about your poetry and I am amazed at your creative potential. I liked this very much, good job Joshua!!! "A contemplation linked through Over weightless spectral on a dark terrarium." Loved this starting verses! SONGO | |
| = Gracias..!! | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [26.Sep.05 15:09] |
| Thanks for your compliment dude, perhaps my text is for all the poets and poetesses, it is meant to create different interpretation towards the creative minds of Gifted individuals, like you, perhaps that element engraved on my text is about two different but inseperable things, as this beautiful planet (Earth)continues to float on this dark cosmos, Good and Evil, Death and life, Fire and Water will always combine yet collide! | |
| = ...infinite twister... | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [26.Sep.05 18:09] |
| Nice idea indeed! The colliding, the eternal vortex,... A poem...on my taste... Keep it on! | |
| = . | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [27.Sep.05 03:00] |
| Thank you :-) | |
| = well chosen words :) | Diana Pacuraru [04.Oct.05 23:34] |
| Thank you for your comment. I never thought this poem would be appreciated, I never had such good opinion about it. And let me tell you the story of its title - I write my titles before I even write the poems, in my phone. I went in a cemetery and got the inspiration to write this poem. I wrote it and then went to see what title was next in the phone. And it was "Sexually Entombed". Weird link eh? Glad that it opened new horizons to you. I know Avril Lavigne - I can't stand her and being compared to her. :) As for your poem, I like how you pictured these two combined opposites - life and death. Good image indeed, well chosen words. | |
| = Writing poetry. | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [07.Oct.05 11:53] |
| You're really cool, you can really write poems where ever you are! perhaps I just write if i feel bad, I doesn't write poetry from time to time, just whenever I feel intense, that's all perhaps thats why you have an genuine engraved talent within your heart, And your style and talent I really appreciate it, I can feel the intense sometimes | |