| = blood on my tainted valor, ruined ego | Akira Sendoh [08.Dec.05 04:23] |
| Ruined ego since, but now it is much destroyed with wrath. A poem from grief and anger, both collaborate giving off a parchment, a powerful spell that shattered the ground turning it to canyons? or everything just turns again in again, no direction but w/ defenite impact? ..seven.. | |
| = untamed words coming out of ones lips | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [09.Dec.05 12:14] |
| so close, anyway you're right about the ego thing, on my last part about the red canyon it is about anger, but the over all aspect, it is not written for the purpose of raging expression, but rather for the sadness, on where her words are so incautious, you're hurt too much, as a result, too much grief and so on... that last sob would be the most powerful, surely it will creat a tremor shattering the plains into canyons, can you imagine that?[that is just symbolism] as the last cry, even though her words were like a coil over and over, it came to the point where it truly became sharp, where you think of no returning. got the whole point buddy? You're just too close or half way about it. | |