| + k | ion amariutei [15.Feb.08 05:31] |
| quirky logic, as it becomes a haiku, good rhythm (steps, shadow, light) and just a dash of absurd to make it interesting (steps on the wall). purists will protest, but i think you’re on the right track | |
| = I thank you Ion! | Marius Surleac [15.Feb.08 10:08] |
| I am overwhelmed! I thank you very much for this honor and hope that I won't disappoint you regarding the "right track". Once again thank you! | |
| = Those noisy steps on the wall | Ada Ionescu [28.Oct.08 21:28] |
| I liked it too! :) Few words generating a world to reflect on. | |
| = danke! | Marius Surleac [28.Oct.08 21:32] |
| There's a different way of perceiving physics of our days. I like my poems to be very visual, the reader to see the image I thought about when writing. Thank you Ada! Cheers, Marius | |