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 =  welcome new member...
Marius Surleac
[02.May.08 10:37]
Surrealism - is my first impression on the text, and the time that is indigo is perfectly true; I like the images you wanted to point out here, but one day all these will be just memories indeed.
Cheers!

 =  Marius is right regarding surrealism....
John Willy Kopperud
[02.May.08 11:47]
...but in this case we may also talk about a kind of religious and/or existential symbolism. Interesting! Welcome to another
accomplished newcomer!
Cheers from Willy.

+ And..
John Willy Kopperud
[02.May.08 12:26]
...I add a yellow one.
Willy

 =  salvador dali
Mike Aspros
[03.May.08 08:36]
this poem paints salvador dali image in my mind. Each statement is like a brush stroke. very nice . good work.

 =  i don't think...
Marius Surleac
[03.May.08 08:42]
I don't think that there is a Salvador Dali perspective, maybe "the god on a virtual cross" have similarities with Dali's painting with Jesus crucified on a cross upon the world in a 3D perspective, with the cross made by lots of untied cubes. Dali has some paintings with Jesus on a cross.

 =  ))
Camelia Radu
[09.May.08 14:59]
Thank you, my friends...

 =  thanks.
Christopher Thripp
[09.May.08 16:26]
camelia ..great poem interesting perspective.

+ Foresight and sensitivity
Edilberto González Trejos
[10.May.08 03:15]
Real smart but above all, HIGHLY POETIC, sensitive and foreseeing!

 =  to me it's crystal...
Sorana Petrescu Felicia
[20.May.08 22:54]
crystal clear what this poem is all about... :)
our time starts to flow backwards,

beautiful poem, with a special subject, only few can see through.




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