| = Comments please... | Irene Singleton [12.May.08 17:31] |
| First Haiku ever written - appreciate all comments please :) | |
| = Number of texts limitation-pay attention!!! | Marius Surleac [12.May.08 17:18] |
| Irene, first of all please do not post more than two texts per day; secondly, do not make comments to your own texts before anyone will comment upon...you can post comments to your text after somebody else will make comments to your texts. Thank you very much! | |
| = why goodbye? | Marius Surleac [12.May.08 17:31] |
| Anyway, the text is visual but what I want to ask you is: Why "goodbye" and not "welcome" referring to connection with the last stanza. Cheers from Marius! | |
| = Sorry... | Irene Singleton [12.May.08 17:38] |
| Sorry Marius - I read the policy which says maximum of 4-5 texts per day, should this be changed then? From now on I will restrict my creative flow to 2 per day :), latter comment duly noted. Thank you. ;0 | |
| = Goodbye... | Irene Singleton [12.May.08 17:52] |
| Goodbye to the spring and welcome to the summer; seasons of life evolving; all babies grow and fly the nest. Thank you for your comment. :) | |
| = i know... | Marius Surleac [12.May.08 17:55] |
| Yes, I understand that; what I meant was the fact the all these creatures get out from their nest when the spring comes, at least I think so. Thank you very much. | |
| = Thanks Marius :) | Irene Singleton [12.May.08 18:15] |
| I thought of life starting when spring comes but they stay in the nest until mature - when summer comes - I have much to learn though, so thank you for helping this process ;) | |
| = chris | Christopher Thripp [13.May.08 07:20] |
| well well hun inspired you are ...great to see irene let it flow... | |