| = Smiling | Claudia Sandoi [25.Jul.08 17:37] |
| So many poems in just one. Cannot decide which part is my favourite. Probably the loose chain and my own demons. I just love your style. I guess I have some catching up to do when it comes to your poems. It will be my pleasure, obviously. | |
| = how's that for a "corporate" answer? :) | dan marius [25.Jul.08 18:11] |
| your feedback is most welcomed. thank you | |
| = re: your revolution | Corina Gina Papouis [26.Jul.08 08:03] |
| your poem is full of vivid images, i sense restlesness and anger, it's a real revolution!:)I liked it.. cheers, Corina | |
| = words of wisdom | dan marius [28.Jul.08 17:26] |
| yes anger is essential. without it you end up... hmmm... happy? | |
| = first he'll take Manhattan | Veronica Valeanu [04.Jun.09 16:04] |
| here I found your style, the one that suits you best a chain of reactions i don't find anything obtuse, every line has a good cut it's like a zoom in that steals several seconds to make the zoom out (where the root of the poem is) more blurred. in fact the reader's task is to defocus our attention and I think this is one of your main techniques good! | |
| = *er | Veronica Valeanu [04.Jun.09 16:05] |
| *his attention | |
| = . | dan marius [04.Jun.09 19:37] |
| you seem to see more in my poems than I do :) which is fine. | |