| = opinium | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 21:41] |
| this are the best words> /there is nothing i want more than to feel the rush of execution and decisions that you make for us.../ i like the way you are reading, i can see the diference now. with fear not, ec | |
| = star | Daniela Voicu [07.Aug.08 21:41] |
| ,,so fear not be selfish in your ways for i am committed to our cause i will not fail on the promises that were made to you ..." I like this part of poem ...very nice exprimetion. star | |
| = wonderful | Mike Aspros [07.Aug.08 19:31] |
| for me this speaks of true love for another person, and having faith in them. If most spouse followed this in their marriages, we wouldn't have so many divorces. I like the rhythm, the simple words, especially 'falter'. Its been a pleasure to read your peom. best, | |
| = good one | Lynn West [08.Aug.08 00:36] |
| a job well done my friend | |
| = thank you ... | Christopher Thripp [08.Aug.08 02:04] |
| thank you everyone who commented much appreciated this is one of two poems i wrote..the other i will post soon ... thank you ... | |