| = opinium|
|this are the best words> |
/there is nothing i want more than
to feel the rush of execution and
decisions that you make for us.../
i like the way you are reading, i can see the diference now.
with fear not,
| = star|
|,,so fear not be selfish in your ways|
for i am committed to our cause i
will not fail on the promises that
were made to you ..."
I like this part of poem ...very nice exprimetion.
| = wonderful|
|for me this speaks of true love for another person, and having faith in them. If most spouse followed this in their marriages, we wouldn't have so many divorces. I like the rhythm, the simple words, especially 'falter'. Its been a pleasure to read your peom. best,|
| = good one|
|a job well done my friend|
| = thank you ...|
|thank you everyone who commented much appreciated this is one of two poems i wrote..the other i will post soon ...|
thank you ...