| = kind of deflated | ion a [15.Sep.08 07:26] |
| it starts promising but kind of fizzles out. "beyond our words/ lies solitude" => fine, kind of a haiku setup, even if a little pretentious "pale bride of moonlit nights/ sunk in the bitter promise/ of earth's cold embrace" => hmmm, all too predictable, sort of 19th century teenage angst, etc. | |