| = ! | Marius Surleac [30.Sep.08 23:34] |
| there you can use "united" instead of "units" | |
| = Sweet | Mike Aspros [03.Oct.08 08:20] |
| little image you painted here. best, Mike | |
| = With litle words! | Gradinaru Danut [03.Oct.08 22:08] |
| I use litle words for this image, but i think is nice. Thank you Marius! Thank you Mike! | |
| = In very short poems... | John Willy Kopperud [03.Oct.08 22:30] |
| ...like this one precision is essential. Every word and syllable must hit the spot. Therefore Marius' comment did a lot for this poem and I really enjoyed the final result. Cheers from Willy | |