| = some mistakes.. | Radu Herinean [04.Nov.08 09:46] |
| not a bad composition, however some errors in the text. You should only use "you're" when you are replacing "you are". In most situations above the correct spelling is: your neck, your lovely face, your love, etc. Basically, the only correct use above seems to be "you're free". Also, I would think the "whipe" you used should be "wipe". Make the correction and we'll reevaluate the classification of the text. | |