| = . | Corina Gina Papouis [24.Nov.08 00:59] |
| winter (love) should not be just cold and grim: just like this poem, fills you up with a warm-fuzzy feeling... Nice! Cheers, Corina | |
| = corina. | Christopher Thripp [24.Nov.08 04:04] |
| thank you corina...appreciated my thoughts exactly. | |
| = last | felix nicolau [04.Dec.08 21:02] |
| i would put away the last stanza. seeing the distribution of the lines i expected to find an old way of writing but, to my pleasant surprise, it is free of conventions and fairly refained | |
| = felix | Christopher Thripp [04.Dec.08 21:36] |
| thank you much appreciated felix... | |