| = . | Laurenţiu Ion [08.Jan.09 13:00] |
| It's "toO much white ...toO much cold" instead of "to much white ...to much cold". | |
| = ... | Daniela Voicu [08.Jan.09 15:57] |
| Thank you, darga :) | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [08.Jan.09 20:52] |
| Daniela, there are few errors as well here. I would see the poem as follows: "so cold ... walking on the snow storm my arms try to find you in white places too much white angels throw flowers from the sky my tiers are frozen my lips are blue no breath to call your name I need you here to warm my soul and put some colour in my life... too much white ... too much cold" Also, what exactly did you meant with "tiers" because it doesn't sound so good in the stanzas' arrangement. Best wishes, Marius | |